tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5187530331365125832.post6012501085404413295..comments2023-10-28T00:51:05.613-07:00Comments on A Goldfish's Tale: A show of cardsGoldFishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01871303722492858769noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5187530331365125832.post-57488487416769682932015-12-13T21:09:38.265-08:002015-12-13T21:09:38.265-08:00The incredibly cold and dark side of it. I wish yo...The incredibly cold and dark side of it. I wish you would write. December calls for dying flames to not die. And for your beautiful imagery!GoldFishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01871303722492858769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5187530331365125832.post-28943356457431132012015-12-13T21:09:27.457-08:002015-12-13T21:09:27.457-08:00The incredibly cold and dark side of it. I wish yo...The incredibly cold and dark side of it. I wish you would write. December calls for dying flames to not die. And for your beautiful imagery!GoldFishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01871303722492858769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5187530331365125832.post-37798460991365550722015-09-28T10:10:33.077-07:002015-09-28T10:10:33.077-07:00The dark side of the moon? Burning away to coldnes...The dark side of the moon? Burning away to coldness.Minkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00754160049866274241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5187530331365125832.post-68764859984632664652015-09-13T12:04:14.119-07:002015-09-13T12:04:14.119-07:00Antara:I don't think the possessive, insecure ...Antara:I don't think the possessive, insecure ones are hardest to get over. Humans tend to not value whatever comes easy. And devoted ones are just rare. Jewels. <br />Chronus: who said I'm the person this poem is about? Lol. <br />Thanks for dropping by. GoldFishnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5187530331365125832.post-60474316997956867112014-01-10T09:24:39.489-08:002014-01-10T09:24:39.489-08:00I find this interestingly paradoxical. On the one ...I find this interestingly paradoxical. On the one hand, you (or the narrator) are expressing undeserved insecurity (rather, negation of oneself). On the other hand, all the feelings expressed are what one would want from one's ideal lover. Isn't it always the devoted, possessive, insecure ones that are the hardest to get over? Anyway, other than that, this was thought provoking. But sad Antara Bhatiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09971569208027589723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5187530331365125832.post-91353898821993549652013-05-06T08:15:35.497-07:002013-05-06T08:15:35.497-07:00I hope when you look back at it, some day, you'...I hope when you look back at it, some day, you're in a better place. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com